His songs could necrotize flesh worshipping the death maiden with no mercy — Saturn basking in distaste as Coyotes fly over hedges and Ravens watch the flesh from above Mourning doves call to the she-wolf awaiting rainThanks for reading Shadow Smoke!
Very descriptive. I have much to learn.
This is oh so beautiful and pulled me in. I want more! Thank you for sharing this and all of your exquisite tapestries of words.
I hope Benno sees this since his publication is called Saturn's Funhouse :D
Swoon!! Gorgeous from the first to the last.
That last stanza is so terse yet feels so loaded with meaning. Brilliant.
After reading, I can feel there is beauty in death and the dead. Thanks for this sharing poem!
Beautiful!
The beginning made me think of the song 'Killing me softly'.
The poem also somehow made me slow down and read it word for word savoring each one without the use of a lot of commas.
Thank you for the poem!
Beautifully written
Lovely!